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GRE习作-People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making

 
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People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their ownmaking


Many genious individuals contend that people's behavior is largely determined byforces not of their own making. Admittedly, forces are powerful enough toregulate many behaviors varying from children to adults. However, I don't agreethis conclusion. Totally, I conclude that the behaviors of ours are largelydetermined by our own making rather than external forces.
I admit that forces have powerful functions regarding to the regulation ofpeople's behavior. In our daily lifes, we need to obey any kind of rules. If wedisobeyed those rules, others or the society would punish us for the inbehavior.The punishment is often very hard and the receptors of it do not definitely wantit again. So in fact, people in this society should obey all the rules issuedby our government or any insititutions relevant to one individual. For instance,the law is there and anybody who wants to break the law for their own benefitswill finally pay back what they got by their inappropriate behaviors.
Moreover, the internal incentives of our behaviors are from inside of our mindswhich reflect a personal preference to the external environments. The real powerto drive people keep a behavior is actually the wish to live a peace and healthylife of their own. It is unbelivable to carry all the book of rules in our purseanywhere we go which means that people know the rules by their heart. Anyconcious elites have a good judgement of good and evil. The law is only anexternal form of those judgements already roots in each normal person's minds.Soactually, in most conditions, people keep their good behaviors due to their ownmaking to achieve a good opportunity to live better.
In addition, own making is an efficient way to keep each elites more durable inthe shaping of behaviors which demonstrates a more probability that own makingis the final decider. The efficiency of forces such as rules and laws aretrancident which indicates that the power of them diasappear as soon as thesupervisions disappear. It does not influence its receptor's mind by a goodguidence. Nevertheless, it employs the power of fear and hate. As a consequence,people become more fierce after the long-time constrain of forces.
In summary, people's behavior is determined by their own making to a largerdegree rather than the forces of others or society. Although I have wellunderstanding about the power of external forces in regulating people's externalbehavior, it is more like an sub factor in the determination of an geniousindividual's long-term behavior.
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